Editorial Portrait Illustrations
'Bahamian Reporters'
Jordon Ritchie
Final Designs before Critique:
After the critique, it was clear that the backgrounds were not working with the style of my portrait illustrations. Instead, it was advised that I play around with color moving forward, and stick with the solid color backgrounds from my very first experimentations.
Final designs
After considering the advice taken from my critique, it was clear that I must remove my attempts at creating personal backgrounds for each portrait. I am glad I did so. With the backgrounds now gone, I do feel that there is more consistency, and a cohesive nature to the portraits now. I appreciate the composition, and the bleeding through of the vibrant background. The colors I used are intentional, Jerome Sawyer's green and blue 'On the Record' set, Theodore Elyett's white and blue fauna patterns from his Fashion Designs, and the pink-red like button and blues of Twitter for Jasper Williams-Ward.
before and after final critique